As a reader, I like the style of this writing. I like how you can input something deeper than just writing into explaining why you write. I would be curious to see what kind of paper this would be if you just took out the “why I write” component to it. However, then again, this is a why I write essay and I think you should spend more time incorporating and transitioning the connection between your first and last paragraphs into the point of the essay. For me, I feel that your paper contains two diverging topics in one. Overall, this paper works for me. I think it a awesome concept that is really powerful. Who knew that writing could be correlated to something much bigger on the entire scale of human thinking?